Wednesday, June 1, 2016

Draft1: Characters: Timata Xiah Troy  Ben  & the sun

Setting: it was nice & pesfiel. long ago there was a village it was not good
                                                     problem: but the sun was speeding around the world & it was making the moon tired.

Plan: then Timata & Xiah had a plan then they ask Ben & Troy but they was not shore then they made a rope made out of chain they made it to a crater where the sun lived it was so bright they.

bagining: got 60 brick’s when the sun came up they jumped out & they thought the caine on the sun it was struggling they hold it tight the sun was get beaten up

Middle: the sun ask them to stop & the sun will go slow down

Ending: the sun went slow & the people were happy & they  went fishing.

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