Timata's speech

 Timata' speech

Presentation	Voice	Topic		Posture	Appeal
Was there a hook at the beginning? no Were the ideas in a clear order? yes Did the speech have a conclusion? no Were props used effectively? no Was the speaker confident and proud? yes Did the speaker believe in what they are telling you? yes	Was each word clear? yes Could you hear the speaker? Yes    Did they use expression in their voice? no Did they use their voice to hold the audience’s attention? yes Did they speak at an appropriate pace? yes	Did the speech have a logical sequence? no (Hamburger method) Did the speaker use their own words? no Did the speech include interesting ways to hold the audience’s attention -Quotes no -rhetorical questions no -stories no		Was the speaker neatly dressed? yes Did the speaker stand in a relaxed/ confident way? yes Did the speaker use eye contact? Litle bit Did the speaker show they were interested in their speech?  no Were gestures used effectively? no	Did you want to keep listening? yes Did you learn something? yes Did it motivate you? no Did it entertain you?   no Did the speaker use humour? no Was the speed interesting? no

speech

zz Criteria  We have been preparing and presenting speeches this term xiah .

This was our Success Criteria  

 

Presentation	Voice	Topic		Posture	Appeal
Was there a hook at the beginning? yes Were the ideas in a clear order? yes Did the speech have a conclusion? yes Were props used effectively? no Was the speaker confident and proud? yes Did the speaker believe in what they are telling you? yes	Was each word clear? maeby Could you hear the speaker? Yes    Did they use expression in their voice? maeby Did they use their voice to hold the audience’s attention? yes Did they speak at an appropriate pace? yes	Did the speech have a logical sequence? no (Hamburger method) Did the speaker use their own words? maeby Did the speech include interesting ways to hold the audience’s attention -Quotes no -rhetorical -questions storis maeby no		Was the speaker neatly dressed? yes Did the speaker stand in a relaxed/ confident way? yes Did the speaker use eye contact? Litle bit Did the speaker show they were interested in their speech?   yes Were gestures used effectively? yes	Did you want to keep listening? yes Did you learn something? yes Did it motivate you? no Did it entertain you?    yes Did the speaker use humour? no Was the speed interesting? no